Hi fizzie !

I found your poem on the Noticing Newbies page and thought I'd take a look.

The voice is first person, and the tone is mysterious. The diction is above average. There are images of hills, primrose petals and spring blossoms in this piece. The line breaks employ enjambment, and the meter is good. The content was a bit obscure, and I was left a little confused as to what the meaning behind the poem really was toward the middle. My favorite line was "my mind, my worst enemy". Nice work.

Thanks for sharing your talent with us, and keep writing!