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*Home* General Comments and Emotional Impact

A fun poem about dreams. It's not quite often people bring conversation into a poem, but you have started it off with a dialogue and the remaining lines are passive but this does not even show as a difficulty. I like how you explain about dreams, there are lovely dreams filled with joy and then there are weird ones. But just as you say we are the heroes in each dream and we can always wake up to the really scary ones. Well written.

*DocumentBL* Form and Rhyme Scheme

There is rhyming pattern is a,a,b,b. This goes very well with the flow and the rhythm scheme.


*NoteW* Overall

I am giving it 4.5 stars.

Thank you for sharing your work. Keep writing!


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