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General Comments and Emotional Impact

A rictameter poem about rain. You have managed to write about the arrival and the effects of rain very well. Since you wrote it in form I went on to check the syllable counts, and I noticed that line 3 should be 6 syllables but it has only 5 syllables. Line 4 should be 8 syllables but it has nine syllables. The remaining lines go well with the syllable count. I would also suggest to keep the poem centered for a more visual effect. Well written.


Overall

I am giving it 4 stars.

Thank you for sharing your work. Keep writing!


~Princess Zelda
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