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 The Fire Inside Open in new Window. [13+]
About the Fire that everyone has inside whether they want to admit to it or not.
by Ellie Maynard Bryerton Author Icon
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Rated: 13+ | (4.5)
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Review of "The Fire Inside" Open in new Window.

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A poem about the fire that each of us have within us. It is true that we have this potential within and just like a fire, it can be used for good and it and also bring destruction. Some days we feel so alive with the fire raging within us but some days we feel negative and quietened. Your poem is very thought provoking. I can't seem to find any errors in grammar or punctuation. Well written.

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A good poem so I am giving it 4.5 stars.

Thank you for sharing your work. Keep writing!

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