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Oh No! What Do I Do? Open in new Window. [E]
My life's journey.
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Rated: E | (4.0)
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Review of "Oh No! What Do I Do?" Open in new Window.

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A poem about your life's journey. You have used simple words to bring out the story in your poem. You could used emotions and brought out what you felt like in these situations, that would have added more essence to the poem. There are mistakes in grammar or punctuation that can be found. Well written.

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A good poem so I am giving it 4 stars.

Thank you for sharing your work. Keep writing!

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