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I liked this story because of the way it flows with time; the character has different thoughts and feels different things every minute. Making him delusional makes the story scarier because of the voice he hears laughing at him.

My suggestion is to write more in details about his experiences every minute.

Well done. I enjoyed reading this scary story.


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