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Rated: 18+ | (4.5)
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Review of Coca-Bro
First and foremost, thank you for sharing your work . I am not an expert reviewer. I am just another writer, but I know it is the reviews that help us to perfect our craft. My opinions are just that; my opinions.

OVERALL IMPRESSIONS:

So even Santa Claus can be an escort. While not fully what i would consider an erotic story it does give the beginnings of a nice tale. The story is well told and well editted.


PLOT & CHARACTERS:

I guess this is the real commericalization of christmas. The characters are well defined.


SUGGESTIONS/EDITS: Continue the story. Get a little heat to warm santa.

FINAL THOUGHTS:

Well deserving of a good rating.


dblameck
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