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Given: Sep 18, 2013 at 10:59am
Length: 767 Characters |
725 w/o WritingML
Review of Coca-Bro
First and foremost, thank you for sharing your work . I am not an expert reviewer. I am just another writer, but I know it is the reviews that help us to perfect our craft. My opinions are just that; my opinions.
OVERALL IMPRESSIONS:
So even Santa Claus can be an escort. While not fully what i would consider an erotic story it does give the beginnings of a nice tale. The story is well told and well editted.
PLOT & CHARACTERS:
I guess this is the real commericalization of christmas. The characters are well defined.
SUGGESTIONS/EDITS: Continue the story. Get a little heat to warm santa.
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