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| (4.5)| Hi cherry-anne! Every now and then I like to shake up my reading habits a bit and try something a little different. Hence, my selection of this neat little bit of erotica. You've mentioned in your bio-block that you seem to have a talent for writing good erotica, and I can certainly attest to that observation. This work, both versions, were very erotic. You've used an unusual format for the storyline, and of course the risk factor of exposing oneself to a stranger for anonymous sex certainly adds an extra level of passion to the story, for both participants. In a perfect world, of course. In our real world, the risk would probably outweigh the passion. But we know that... This was an extremely well written bit of erotica, that I found to be sexy but not smutty. Well done. I only found one little spot that might benefit by editing, but it did nothing to detract from the read. [his fingers probing between her folds as he felt the slippery heatt heat.] Well done! Regards, H -   My review has been submitted for consideration in "Good Deeds Get CASH!" .
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