I enjoyed this story and I thought the prompt was followed well. I just wished that there were boundaries of some kind that Traci and Mark broke. That would make the story more interesting and the readers would get to know more about the characters if the broke rules. I also think breaking of rules and crossing boundaries would fit so well in this story because of the 'school' prompt.

If not rules, my other suggestion would be internal conflict. This shows the character's struggles making the story more interesting.

Well done. This was a hot story.



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