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First Thoughts: The first paragraph hooked me, I wanted to know if Erica would get to the church. The descriptions are part of the action and moved the plot forward at a good pace.

What I liked: I like Erica's reaction when she suddenly found herself at the church.

Final Thoughts: This is a beautiful Christmas story. Write on.

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