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First Thoughts: The first sentence hooked me, I wanted to know why Susie should not open the door. The conversation between Susie and the voices move the plot forward at a good pace.

What I liked: The last sentence is my favorite because it makes sense that the Voice of Reason would imply I told you so.

Final Thoughts: I enjoyed reading this story. Write on.

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