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Rated: XGC | (4.5)
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Review of Words, Wine and Feelin' Fine
First and foremost, thank you for sharing your work . I am not an expert reviewer. I am just another writer, but I know it is the reviews that help us to perfect our craft. My opinions are just that; my opinions.

OVERALL IMPRESSIONS:

God I'm going to start taking baths instead of showers. This is a good story. Anyone who has done a prolonged writing spurt like what happens with the nano knows the tightness both of the body and spirit that rrsults. Serena has found the perfect way of relaxing and coming down. Thank you for sharing her experience with us.

PLOT & CHARACTERS:

One character just trying to relax after a serious writing episode. The story flows nicely and then almost explodes in the last twelve sentences. The are quick and short and give the impression of the character finding the manual sexual release. It is sensual and passionate and very very well written.

SUGGESTIONS/EDITS:

Use this story as a beginning for something longer. I did not see any necessary changes.

FINAL THOUGHTS:

Keep up the good work. I really enjoyed this story.

dblameck

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