Overall impression: This story of a woman who at her wedding discovers who she truly loves is well done. The emotion comes through the actions as well as the words.

Characterization: Joan is well done as a character and brings the reader into the story. Andrew could have been developed more and Carl needs more development to understand why she prefers Andrew over Carl

Dialogue:the dialogue is good and helps the story move along

Twists and turns: I like the end where she leaves Carl at the altar

Area(s) for improvement: There are some grammar issues but it does not detract from the story




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