Overall impression: I liked this story. The idea of a chain letter was developed in a good manner. The story flows well, and the ending is very good.

Characterization: The main character (man or woman) is not named. They tell the story in first person. Their account brings the reader into the story until the very end.

Dialogue: The dialogue is good, and it advances the story.

Twists and turns: The ending is good.

Area(s) for improvement: I have some suggestions. notes ▼


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