Hi!
I love these descriptions, you had me right with you throughout. I liked the aria arising in the heart. The unexpected ending brought a smile to my face!

A few suggestions / questions:
1. (Second verse, first line) I think you need to make 'danced' past tense.
2. (Third verse, third line) I found that the phrase 'autumn-painted' tripped up my reading a bit.
3. The very last line had me a bit puzzled. It sounded like you were shaken out of the serenity and peace, so I was wondering how it remained. (But then maybe I'm over-analysing things ... ? )

Write On!
- Sonali

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