The first stanza of "Invalid Item"  the rhythm, mood, and the form as a prose poem. The rhythm is that of regular speech and carries the poems emotions forward at a good pace. The main emotions of this poem is joy and beauty.

What I liked: I like the metaphor of this poem that love never gives up.

Technical Problems or Typos: A typo in this line, Wilted all must dead, I suggest changing must to most.

Suggestions: I enjoyed reading this intriguing poem. Write on.



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