"Invalid Item"  is a rhymed poem about summer. The first stanza establishes the rhythm and rhyme scheme which complement each other.

What I liked: Each stanza paints a different picture of the end of a long summer day.

Technical Problems or Typos: The only possible issue is the first line of the last stanza because it breaks the rhyme that chirping, flashing, and shining established in the previous stanzas.

Suggestions: No suggestions.

I enjoyed reading this beautiful poem. Write on.



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