The title and description of "Invalid Item"  hooked me and I had to read the poem. The first stanza establishes the rhythm, rhyme scheme, and mood of the poem. The rhythm and rhyme scheme compliment each other, while the rhythm flows easily from stanza to stanza

What I liked: The first stanza is my favorite because it reveals the beauty of the rose in all its colors.

Technical Problems or Typos: None.

Suggestions: No suggestions.

I enjoyed reading this well-planned and written poem. I am giving it a 5.0 because it paints a word picture of the beauty of roses. Write on.



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