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April 22nd is Earth Day!
When one tugs at a single thing in nature,
he finds it attached to the rest of the world.
-John Muir-


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Overall Thoughts...
I quite enjoyed reading this piece. It was very entertaining, funny and mysterious, too! The whole things keeps you guessing as to who exactly are sharing this conversation and why are they even having it?
I loved the fact that there is a lesson in this story/dialogue - about how we should keep our environment/surroundings clean, and to not waste things because we can recycle quite a lot of things now and turn them into something useful! *Smile*

Some Suggestion/s?
Grammar/Spelling/Punctuation - didn't found anything that needs changing! *Thumbsup* Although, I would like to suggest that you completely separate the title perhaps by adding another space before you start the actual dialogue between the speakers, or by putting the title in bold or something. I just thought presentation-wise (format-wise), giving emphasis on the title would look better. *Blush*

Additional Chatter!
At first, I was thinking this conversation was a normal one between two guys... well, until a word in the 6th line/dialogue clued me in just exactly how this could be related to the environment (one of the genres this piece falls under)! *Bigsmile* And then, I got to the 13th line/dialogue and realized my first guess about the identity of the speakers were wrong! (I don't know why... but for some reason, I thought they were "talking fruits" or something. LOL Maybe a banana and an apple? *Laugh*) Really, trying to make a guess about what they could possibly be talking about and why, is one fun thing about this piece. Thank you for sharing this!



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