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April 22nd is Earth Day!
When one tugs at a single thing in nature,
he finds it attached to the rest of the world.
-John Muir-


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a review!!




Overall Thoughts...
Ooh! That was a great and very entertainign piece! The rhyme and the rhythm was just right (though there were a few imperfect rhymes). Despite the honest thoughts from Mr. Alligator about wanting the zoo-goers for his meal, you kept the overall tone comedic and playful! *Thumbsup*

Some Suggestion/s?
I don't really have any suggestion to make for changes in this piece because I thought it was lovely the way it is. Although, I took a look at your other poetry in this folder and you had cute and suitable images for most of them, so why not one for this one, too? *Wink*

Additional Chatter!
This piece reminded me of my visit to the London Zoo last month when my sister and I went to London. I am now having thoughts about writing a similar piece - but one about a lion! *Laugh*
Thank you for sharing!



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