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SandraLynn

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A very creative poem on writing, or rather the ideas behind what to write. This was a fun rhyming poem. At first I thought this might be constructed using couplets, but then re-visited the definition of a couplet, and each line would have to have the same meter in order for a couplet to exist. Since I am not schooled in poetic forms, that left me with a rhyming poem, that has perfect matches that roll off the tongue. There was one exception, but it was close enough to not be an issue, and could rhyme, depending on your accent and that was the pair urgent and intent.


Overall I liked the voice of the poem. It was fun and light-hearted, poking fun and also seemed playful. This made for a joyous read.

Something to consider is that not many authors, or readers, give much thought to placement or alignment, when it comes to poetry. It is my thought that something as simple as where or how you place a poem on the page, can add to its imagery. Poetry is up to the interpretation of the reader. What a poet writes, and the message a reader gets isn't always the same, especially when using metaphors. That being said, aligning a poem to the left of a page may imply unification; all is right in the world. Centering an item so that all the lines are askew, based upon the character count or spacing, can have the meaning of chaos and turmoil in life or emotion. Though keep in mind, this is just my personal feelings on the subject, and not all will agree with this. Though, it does give one something to consider.


I did notice one formatting flaw and if you look at the poem, you will see you have an open tag for one of the leftinstructions which appears like left} . That is an easy fix. You did well with this fun poem.

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