The title "Invalid Item"  hooked me. The rhythm of this prose poem moves the emotion of longing forward from line to line.

What I liked: This piece brought tears to my eyes because its message is heard by so few.

Technical Problems or Typos: None found.

Suggestions: No suggestions.

I enjoyed reading this thought provoking piece. Write on.



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