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| (4.5)| Hi Kasia. Happy Earth Day!  I like the blunt sound of the title that is direct for the theme and the way the form is created on the page, like an arrow pointing the way. Very impressive format beginning and ending with the same word and the heartfelt plea in the middle to protect now threatened species. It was very clever to refer to the past losses in the beginning and end with what might happen in future.. Nice mirroring. Your weaving was pleasant to read aloud and the alliteration was perfectly chosen to emphasize the message in line 5. That line really struck a chord here.  "strength to save" lends that vibe too. Punctuation was well handled here. I really enjoyed reading your creative expresion with its evocative vibe and call to action. Thanks for speaking for our creatures.  Light on the path as you write on! eyestar 
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