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| (4.0)| HI writeaway! Welcome to WDC! Happy Earth Day!   Oh my gosh! That is an evocatvie poem and I am trying to imagine concrete that hot!  Speaks to global warming and extra hot rays nowadays. Quite original in theme too.Your haiku focuses on a moment in time in summer and I like the contrast of the call for autumn from that minute! The form follows the line and syllable count, has seasonal word. Haiku does not need capital letters and uses minimun punctuation so the essence of the thought in the poem hangs boundless for us to ponder. MM. Using "summer and blaziing heat"--say the same thing really as we know you are speaking of summer with the words. I understand in these short minimalist poems variety and cosnciseness of words to convey image is preferred. Still this is so potent an expression and I had to laugh.  so Job well done!Thanks for this fun read. After the winter we just had though I can't get into your hurry "chills" yet. LOL though it may come soon enough. Light on the path as you write on! eyestar 
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