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Impressions: *Check3* This is such a nicely done past winner. I really liked the Earth Day irony here. When we think of these things you speak of in the poem, can we really be honest and tell ourselves we helped save the planet enough? I love your answer. A flat-out no. Good for our theme this day.


Grammar, Spelling, Style: *Check3* Good grammar, good spelling. Nice rhyme and rhythm. Good winning ways there. And style? Just as adorable as the poem runs. Serious as it is matter-of-fact. Thoughtfully done.

Suggestions:*Check3* Keep it. It's something to post up.

Last comment:*Check3* I have recycled. I have eaten Green. But I need to do much much more. This is food for thought for everyone who wants to believe in this planet for tomorrow and our children.



April 22nd is Earth Day!


Feather Duster
aka vicki
   *CheckG* You responded to this review 04/22/2014 @ 8:50pm EDT
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