Review of Sinful Indulgence for the Tales of Seduction Contest

First and foremost, thank you for sharing your work . I am not an expert reviewer. I am just another writer, but I know it is the reviews that help us to perfect our craft. My opinions are just that; my opinions.

OVERALL IMPRESSIONS:

Wonderful story. An intricate pattern of emotion and passion wove together to form a delightful episode of sexual fulfillment. I am a judge this month for the Tales of Seduction Contest. This story fulfills the prompt quite well. You've taken a very simple everyday situation and turned it into a very erotic little stay and at the same time made it very enjoyable. Trust me when I say that having butter on my popcorn will never be the same again. I will also never look at that basting brush sitting in the kitchen drawer without having memories of this story. This story truly rates a near perfect score and a place in the memory of all readers.

PLOT & CHARACTERS:

You take a common everyday occurrence and see the sensual possibility erupting from it. You take two common characters and give them a heightened sexuality. Your description of the passion and creativity they share in their spontaneous love-making is not only entertaining it is also arousing in nature. You included smells in your story right from the beginning with the smell of popcorn and then moved to the tangy scent of melted butter. I almost can also detect the scent of Mia's arousal as well. One cannot read this story without smiling. I smile for the love they share and I even smile for the humour that you concluded the story with. An exceptional read.

SUGGESTIONS/EDITS:

Share more of your creative talent with us. I would not change anything in this story.

FINAL THOUGHTS:

Keep writing. I notice the editing you did with the story and I approve..

dblameck

My review has been submitted for consideration in "Good Deeds Get CASH!" .