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Hi Teerich - 2019 Author Icon ,
I liked your poem and enjoyed reading it. A constanza form is difficult to rite butyou managed the meter and rhyme perfectly. Well done! Only suggestion for improvement is that there is a lack of enough feel here.A bit more usage of metaphors, imagery( abstract) would enhance it's beauty. Similies are also encouraged. On an average, a nice read. Write on!
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