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 Very creepy! I thought you did a great job describing how the darkness moved, and enveloped her. I also liked the psychological tone of the story. I wasn't sure if it was real or imagined. Nicely done!   The Beginning- Strong beginning, bringing us right into the psyche of your main character. The Title- Being a fan of horror, the word, dark, definitely drew me in.   The Description- The darkness always hides the most hideous things. You never know what may come out of it. The Ending- Good ending. You brought the story to a close nicely. The characterization- I think you did a good job of letting us know how your character was feeling, both emotionally and physically. You also let us into her head a bit, giving the story a bit of suspense. What I liked best about the story- I enjoyed your descriptive language. I also enjoyed the suspense of wondering if this was a physical or psychological presence. Thanks so much for sharing your writing with us.  WRITE ON! Tracey   My review has been submitted for consideration in "Good Deeds Get CASH!"  .
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You responded to this review 06/25/2014 @ 1:36am EDT