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 | Nightmare  [E] I thought I'd take a stab at poetry...Be honest in reviews. Also, this is a rondeau.  |
| (5.0)   Greetings! The following are only my personal opinions. Ultimately, you and only you can decide what works best for your item. If you disagree with any of the suggestions below, feel free to ignore them. I am not a perfect writer myself but "Practise makes a man perfect" neither I want to make you depress or angry, so Write On! At first I couldn't believe that this is the first time you wrote a poem. It was really good and you followed the form quite well. I used to find writing poetry in rhyme difficult but then I tried it a few days ago and it wasn't has hard  You might want to add a link or some information about the form of the poetry in which it is written. Although I know the form but other readers might not. The choice of words was really good as to keep the lines rhymed and to give the correct meaning to the reader. The title of the poem is good and you expressed the nightmare as shadow in good words. The flow of the poem was also good and the title attracted me to read the poem. The poem suits the title and the title suits the theme. There were no grammatical errors that I could find in your poem, perfect!  Thank you for allowing me to read and review your poem.   Write On! Take care and Have a great day! ** Images For Use By Upgraded+ Only **
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