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These 100-word contests are a lot of fun, aren't they? I wanted to say something about this piece. I like that you didn't add "said person" after each line during the dialogue. I notice many writers overuse that. It's good to allow the reader to keep up and hear the line being said in their own tone (unless it plays a major role in the scene) instead of filling the pages with unnecessary dialogue attribution, especially since a back-and-forth is obviously taking place. Nice job. Welcome to WdC. Shoot me an email or IM anytime. I love to chat with people.
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