Hello, Skylit!

I loved the flow of this piece. The textual arrangement just added so much more to it. (nice job on that)
The only real compliant I have, which is mostly just a personal preference, is the color of the text. Being the light pink made it a little bit difficult to read as quickly but really, not much of an issue at all. Great piece and I definitely look forward to reading more of your work. Write me or IM me anytime. I truly enjoy talking with other writers. Write on, my friend!
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