Hello, I am PandaPaws and I am reviewing this piece as part of the Simply Positive Group!

TITLE: What a wonderful title for this poem, great imagery.

THEME: Despair as winter grabs hold.

TONE: the tone is somber throughout.

RHYTHM/METER: The meter and rhythm is wonderful throughout your piece, your word choice maintains this rhythm.

RHYME: None of your words for the rhymes seem forced, this poem is great.

FIGURATIVE LANGUAGE: Your metaphor of equating winter and disease is fascinating. A great use of imagery. You also not only have a great feel for alliteration but you make great use of assonance as well! Great job!

SPELLING/GRAMMAR: no errors noted.

EXCELLENT WRITING EXAMPLES: Absolutely love these lines...

When sleep comes slow but lasts all night,
Day drags on with the speed of light.


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