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 The Secret Open in new Window. [E]
it is a story about a family who is keeping a dark secret from their child.
by Matthew Author Icon
Review of The Secret  Open in new Window.
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Rated: E | (4.0)
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Hi, Matthew I just read an item of yours.

Yes, it really shocking when someone gets to know that his/her real parents is not real. I like the way you are telling your story. If I ever hear that my parents are not mine I would surely black out.

Suggestion: I think if you put some paragraph break than it will be more interesting to read.

simply positive group.
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