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A Walk Open in new Window. [E]
A walk above the clouds with God the Divine.
by Kings Author Icon
Review of A Walk  Open in new Window.
Review by Mina~ Author IconMail Icon
Rated: E | (5.0)
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Hi, Kings I just read your poem and I feel like to review you. Nice imagination about walk and talk with god and friend in heaven. We people come to this world only for short time. One day we all leave from this beautiful world. Somebody go to hell and some of them heaven. Those who did good deeds in earth heaven are for them.
I like the lines
He will always love me here in God's paradise.
He'll never forsake me God has given sacrifice.

Overall Impression : Nice flowing. Good Imagination. Thanks for sharing your poem with us.

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