Review number # 4 of week 3/12-3/18

Hi Charlie,

My name is Lyn and I am doing a review for Simply Positive.

Please remember I am a writer, I know what it feels like to be reviewed! Please take what you feel is helpful and disregard the rest. Only YOU know what is right for your writing!

Title:Abstract Harmony

First Impression: Wicked Awesome, Lyn's comment. Vic's comment Requiem, interesting view of death, no going back from there.

What I liked: Our love in puddles on the bed sheets. The image in the beginning is so vivid of passion.

What needs your attention: Not a dang thing!

Favorite Parts: Flat line... I actually felt me hold my breath before I began the last stanza. Awesome, image, powerful statemtn

Overall Impression: I'm nominating this one next year. This is WICKED WICKED AWESOME! No, I don't want to leave my Maine girl behind. I love this Charlie!
Vic said, it is powerful, dark and raw! He agreed with me, Excellent work!

Thank you for letting me read your work. It was our IMMENSE pleasure!
Lyn




My review has been submitted for consideration in "Good Deeds Get CASH!" .