Greetings, Matt ! Thank you for entering "Writer's Cramp wishes WDC Happy 25th!" !

What a nice little ending! I enjoyed how it all turned out. Nice job.

I enjoyed these lines:

She tasted the soup and added some more chillies because her fiery boys loved a bit of spice. Paul once boasted that he could eat a pack full of chillies, which he had genuinely believed until Glen had challenged him to prove it. No amount of milk could drown the tears.
[I could really visualize this! )

Best of luck in the contest!

Have a great day and...
  K e e p on W r i t i n g !

Cubby ")


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