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Greetings, fisfall Author Icon! Thank you for entering "Writer's Cramp wishes WDC Happy 25th!" Open in new Window.!

*Reading* Ah... I can smell the garlic and onions! I like how you followed the prompt by not having to tell us there are five children, but showing us, as each one has a job to do. Nice work.

*Thumbsupr* And now I'm hungry... *Bigsmile* I liked these lines...

One child to cut the onions
one to cut the tomatoes
one to scrape the corn kernels from the cob
one to cut avocados
one to chop the garlic

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