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Greetings, {suser:as***a}! Thank you for entering "Writer's Cramp wishes WDC Happy 25th!" Open in new Window.!

*Reading* Oh, wow. *Shock* I feel worn out just from reading your piece, lol. Good Job on following that part of the prompt which told you to...Imagine a family with five kids that seem to bicker and squabble endlessly. *Bigsmile*

*Thumbsupr* I loved this last paragraph: *Laugh*

At that time the doorbell rang and Barry, the father, entered and said 'Honey, I'm home. God, I'm starving. Is there anything to eat?' Mary peeped out of the kitchen with messy hair and a crazy look, 'Yes, I'm making soup out of my brain. Just wait a bit for it to boil.' Barry smiled and said 'Must be something tasty.'

*Frown* Although I was able to read through just before the contest ended, it was unfortunate you did not quite follow the entire prompt which included:

...and title your piece:

Making Tortilla Soup


*Smile* Just make sure next time you read the prompt over again. You were not the only one who didn't follow it precisely. *Wink*

Have a great day and...
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