Hi ANN Counselor, Lesbian & Happy }



I just read your this poem from newsfeed. your poems are always beautiful and this is one of them.

In this world each depends upon other for food. After read your poem it reminds me that in school we learned in biology class that Charles Darwin theory “Survival of the fittest”.

A sparrow target a beetle to eat. A hawk target a sparrow to eat. At last hawk won. It killed sparrow and filled the stomachs of six monster eaglets.
The story you are telling here make me read your poem. And I like the last line

As little beetle smiles and the golden sun sets.

A good imaginative and beautiful poem.

simply positive group.