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Hi, Ann I just read your poem. This poem is really a emotional poem. Who will be the next? One day we all died. Somebody first and somebody last.
God fixed our fate. After read your poem I remembered my little brother who died when he was just twelve.

Nobody knows what will be our fate. So lets celebrate life as long as we live.

Nice poem Ann.

Mina.

simply positive group.
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