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Rated: E | (4.5)
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A story with a moral for the kids who keep having differences. Each child is different and so gets a different ingredient to make the soup. But clever as they are, like their mom put their heads together and hatch a plan to make tortilla soup. Symbolic enough to show to make peace by having their problems brought into the open. Alone, nothing can be achieved, together nothing is impossible.
Style is pretty good with a narration that includes adults and children. Mother, after all is the peace maker, home maker.

Kids are shown the way they are expected to act. Under the directions of the oldest of their brothers, they find a solution to their challenge and succeed in sharing the gold.

Nice story.

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