Review number # 6 of week 3/12-3/18

Hi Sue,

My name is Lyn and I am doing a review for Simply Positive.

Please remember I am a writer, I know what it feels like to be reviewed! Please take what you feel is helpful and disregard the rest. Only YOU know what is right for your writing!

Title: I am a butterfly

First Impression: I would love to be a butterfly in that garden.

What I liked: I am getting woozy from all the pollen. Yeah, like everything in life moderation, though the temptation with such a lovely garden would challenge all creatures.

What needs your attention: Nothing, it is perfect as is.

Favorite Parts: I had forgotten they lay their eggs on the milkweed. It is so sad to see butterflies declining because of all the chemicals people use to keep their yards free of weeds. I prefer the old fashion way, puttering every day and appreciating the imperfections.

Overall Impression: I am glad I visited your port and discovered this lovely butterfly tribute. The wind is whipping away outside, a brisk 34 degrees and I am longing for spring to appear. Thank you for creating a lovely place to visit in the mean time. Well-written and visually stimulating.

Thank you for letting me read your work. It was my immense pleasure!
Lyn




My review has been submitted for consideration in "Good Deeds Get CASH!" .