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Hello shojobeatgirl

This is a wonderfully creative poem about how we are influenced and affected by the people around us. Your use of short lines make this poem a fast read. I love how you've used lists in both your stanzas as well. This is very effective. I certainly agree that we can take on certain characteristics of the people we come into contact with though, at the same time, it's important to maintain a sense of our own uniqueness and individuality.

Quite a thought-provoking little poem.

Thanks for sharing!

Best wishes,
Mark


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