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Poetic Thoughts  [E]
Captivating are the feelings you express in your poems.
by Kings
Review of Poetic Thoughts  
Review by Lyn's a Wit...
In affiliation with SIMPLY POSITIVE GROUP  
Rated: E | (4.0)
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Review number #4 of week May 7-13

Hi Kings,

My name is Lyn and I am doing a review for Simply Positive.

Please remember I am a writer, I know what it feels like to be reviewed! Please take what you feel is helpful and disregard the rest. Only YOU know what is right for your writing!

Title:Poetic Thoughts

First Impression: The title is what caught my attention.

What I liked: A poem about poetry is what appealed to me.

What needs your attention: The second line in the first stanza, I would use something different than poems because it is to close to the ending in the previous line. How about you write masterfully emotions I've never known. Just food for thought *Smile*

Favorite Parts: I love the last two stanzas! "Rhythm and rhyme gel to a sweet liquid emotion", are a joy to read for a poetry writer and lover of the written word. It is not easy mastering both.
"Painting a picture as in art", every poet hopes they accomplish that when they bare their heart and soul to the reader.


Overall Impression: Delightful surprise, I am glad I visited your port, I will be back again.

Thank you for letting me read your work. It was my pleasure!
Lyn



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