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Rain  [E]
A Shakespearean Sonnet-Influenced Poem.
by Frighten Ðead the Witch Warp
Review of Rain  
Review by Lyn's a Wit...
In affiliation with SIMPLY POSITIVE GROUP  
Rated: E | (5.0)
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Review number # 6 of week May 7-13

HiFiction Diva,

My name is Lyn and I am doing a review for Simply Positive.

Please remember I am a writer, I know what it feels like to be reviewed! Please take what you feel is helpful and disregard the rest. Only YOU know what is right for your writing!

Title: Rain

First Impression: Initially, the picture of rain enticed me to visit.

What I liked: The imagery created by your word choices made me smile and enjoy the rainy experience. I love walking in the rain.

What needs your attention: Nothing!

Favorite Parts: "Her April showers can bloom reflection and drive those with old afflictions to their beds." A potent reminder that the weather affects so many people. I feel blessed that I can enjoy the rain at my age. I am truly glad that human hands cannot control the rain, we would not handle the additional power well.

Overall Impression: The sonnet is well done, the rhythm and rhyme work very well, definitely a joy to read. Thank you for writing a beautiful sonnet!

Thank you for letting me read your work. It was my IMMENSE pleasure!
Lyn



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