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Admiration finds a unique voice here. The poet's understanding of the other person merits applause. To read a mind so well is not a light matter. Knowing the behavior pattern of the one who always shone and soared higher takes a close knowledge.
Imagery shows the other person in a sharper light. Obviously he/she knows the secret of success and happiness too.
"And while I complained,
You tried harder."
We can take a leaf out of this person's life. Detachment and a great balance of mind make a splendid combination.
With an attitude like this can life be ever monotonous?

short free verses flow well.

Write on!
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