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*Giftp* Hi there! Bob the Warm Fuzzy and I are here today to review your contest as part of "15 Finger Frenzy!" Open in new Window.

*Gifto* I've decided to tackle contests and activities, because many of these items are overlooked when it comes to reviews. And you asked for birthday feedback after all! I couldn't not review yours!

*GiftV* I love the teddy bears! So cute. And I would have to say my favorite part of the page is the Spa Packages.

*Giftg* Short stories and poems always have something to spot for suggestions. Contests and other activities are highly visual and harder for some to comment on. The good news is I want to art school - woohoo! So I will pass on some ideas that popped out at me.

First, the use of color - You've got a cute pink and turquoise in your title image, you could use that as your highlight color for fonts rather than a mix of other colors. Second, don't be afraid to play with font size. Making titles bigger will help guide the eye through the information etc.

The last thing I would suggest is maybe sticking with one idea. There is a blog challenge, a review challenge, a raffle, and an auction. It's a cool idea to have everything under one roof, but there are already a bunch of those out there. The spa idea feels the most unique and might draw in people better. All of this, however is just "nit picky" so I have something to offer you *Bigsmile*

*Giftb* All in all, there are some fun things in here! You should advertise more to get more people to stop by.

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