I d really love this piece, which is rare for me. I am not into poetry...like at all. Haha
I love how the farther you go into the poem the more you get an idea of what the narrator is. My first thought was a car and then I realized it was a bike.
The detail is amazing. I feel like I can see the bike.

If you have some time, I have a "story"/"slam poetry"/unknown piece called One More on my page.

I am having an issue with it. It was originally a story, but then a friend reformatted it to look like a poem, claiming that it was more like slam poetry. If you could give it a look over and help me from a poets perspective that would be amazing.