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Durian, The Extreme Fruit  Open in new Window. [E]
All you need to know about durians.
by Elycia Lee ☮ Weekend! Author Icon
Review by Soh ~ Luminousa Author IconMail Icon
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Rated: E | (4.5)
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This is a very informative article on the durian fruit. I have never heard of this fruit before and this piece has expanded my knowledge. A fruit smelling like gas on the outside but really sweet and soft on the inside. I can draw a parallel of this concept to humans too. There are people in the world, who can seem rough and gruff on the outside but have hearts of gold.

I liked the comic style of writing. You've given both the pros and cons of this fruit, and how it should and should not be eaten. The confusion of whether to accept or reject this fruit by individuals and social groups was the best part of it.

I found a small typo in the end of the following sentence -

so that the durians can be shared and relished by all its adoring fans while holding discussions with a durian breathe

The word 'breath' instead of 'breathe' would be better here.


I loved reading this article. Thanks for sharing a part of your culture with us. Keep writing and sharing *Heart*

Soh

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