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| (4.0)| Review brought to you by: "Game of Thrones" by Gaby  PLOT - Elizabeth takes a walk in the bitter cold winter night. She has second thoughts, but plods on anyway, seeking the comfort of her favorite spot. Once there she sits on a boulder and takes in her surroundings until a little red light appears and she waits to see if it's really who she thinks it is. SETTING - Good moments with the crunching of the snow beneath her feet, her breath in front of her face as the cold make sit appear in the air. CHARACTERS - Elizabeth on a walk, needing some peace and seeking it from her favorite spot not too far from home. GRAMMAR/SPELLING/DIALOGUE - The inner dialog was good, as she hoped that Rudolph would keep coming towards her as she quietly waited once he noticed her. THOUGHTS - Cute Christmas story. I had no idea what the red light meant until she actually thought his name. When she first realized it was Rudolph, her excitement over seeing him was almost childlike, which makes sense since as children we love that Rudolph the outcast gets to be special and lead Santa's sleigh. I liked that she took him home and tried to help him. I had never heard of writing a letter to Santa and burning it in the fire before. That was a nice touch. Write on!  
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